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» Poem: lifting me back
lifting me back
written by not_alive_nor_dead
09:31 PM 3/23/05
it was then time to remember
remember one good memory bout me
the whole funeral home was mourning
but for me it was all good

Craig remembered us
we were as happy as can be
holding hands
just together

Barnie membered the project
our best oral ever
we'd speak another language
we got a hundred

Nini remmebered our long nights
she thought i'd never go
she remembered my smile
and my happy laugh

everyone el;se remembered my vioce
the amzing vocalist i had been
i had been once that one person
who did everything i wanted

all these mourning thoughts
brought me back to life
i found a mic.
started to sing

they heared me
cried and cried
they knew i was there
with every thought

wishing
lifting
they felt my spirit
thye cheered up

my funeral was a mirical
they made memories
that lasted till their deaths
thye never forgot


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-27-2005 - 01:46 AM)
woah this is really good it made me cry ur a really good poet

by LadyAngele (4-12-2005 - 01:35 AM)
Very beautiful poem. Lovely. I was enthralled. Great work!

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