» Poem: My Fault *plz comment* |
My Fault *plz comment*
written by mishy007701:32 PM 3/24/05There goes my happy date
And here comes my fate
I shouldn't have said that stuff to you
Now you've run off, what will I ever do?
You were my guiding light
Now we've had a huge fight
And you've left me here
Now there's so much I fear
No one to hold me through the pain
It seems I have been left alone again
Now back to nursing my broken heart
Now it seems I am back to the start |
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I dunno why i wrote it, it just came out. Yeah. PLEASE COMMENT? [ View mishy0077's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 359 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by forbiddenangelofdarkness (3-24-2005 - 01:40 PM)
It's very pretty comment on all of mine sometime i need feedback |
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