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» Poem: Obessession with Perfection
Obessession with Perfection
written by suicide_penguin
12:59 PM 3/25/05
*Obessession with Perfection = Suicide or Depression*

Sitting on my bed
Thoughts of Suicide in my head
Sitting here I start to cry

Everything else I tried didn't work
Doing this all because you were a jerk
Now I have to hide my Depression,
this all because of my stupid Obessession

All I wanted was you to love me, if you never did it's Perfection.
If you never did it's about this, you see?
I really love you so,
I think it's about time, you know?

I get a razor and start to slice
Taking my life with a roll of the dice
I'm feeling dizzy, falling down
I hope you see me lying on the ground

I really thought your love was true
But when I said, "Lie to me!" you said "I love you!"


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» Comments / Feedback
by Ucantsaveme14 (3-25-2005 - 02:46 PM)
Heyz! I love your writing.. Keep it up! Everything is soo tru:( XoXKristenXoX

by pipa (3-25-2005 - 02:51 PM)
great poem well done!! keep writing

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