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deep
written by not_alive_nor_dead06:10 PM 3/25/05this knife holds a thousand lies
my blood carries a million cries
all of wich are mine
the deepest of deep
i can't carry this load
it is way to heavy
i gotta get rid of something
my lies...
i dig way to deep
i only have bones left
this is the last cut
finally i reached the end
with no more wrists
i die i shame
i got rid of my last vain
adam i'm so................................... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodlyvalentine (3-25-2005 - 06:15 PM)
| lol, i like ur first verse. its really good |
by majormoodswings666 (3-25-2005 - 06:19 PM)
| love ur peom hun....i hope ur ok |
by not_alive_nor_dead (3-25-2005 - 06:19 PM)
| this poem was dificult.. it was for my morals class and i only wrote the first verse and we had to have all 4 so i wrote the other three five mins before it was due.. srry it's so cheesy lolz (there i go again lolz) |
by (guest) (3-25-2005 - 07:04 PM)
| omg britney !!! that was soo beautiful !!!! u should become a poet !!! this is from magalie by the way !!!! i love that poem !!! love ya too sexy !! |
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