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» Poem: Me and You *plz comment*
Me and You *plz comment*
written by mishy0077
01:27 AM 3/26/05
You ask me what I want in life
I tell you I only need my knife
Then you start to cry
Just 'cuz I want to die
Do you really care that much about me?
Is there more to life that I just can't see?
You hold me in your arms and the pain dissapears
But when I cry and scream no one ever hears
I don't tell you the demons that taunt me at night
Because I don't want you to feel the same fright
You don't need to scream like me
You don't want to see what I see


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
PLEASE COMMENT??? I thought of it while i accidently locked myself out of the house this morning. lol. PLEASE COMMENT?

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» Comments / Feedback
by hopeful_love (3-26-2005 - 01:33 AM)
aww... sounds alot like me...

by (guest) (3-26-2005 - 02:06 AM)
Your poem has alot of meaning to it. Its really cool

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