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My Love For You *please comment*
written by mishy007701:34 PM 3/26/05You hold me, the pain dissapears
You kiss me, there go my fears
You wont let bad happen to me
You love me, and i can really see
I love you too, with all my heart
And i have, right from the start
You helped me through all of this
And you were even my first kiss
When I see you my heart skips a beat
My knees feel weak, i have to take a seat
I can't stop smiling when your near
I know that you'll always be here |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I decided to write a HAPPY one. lol. its about rory. lol. PLEASE COMMENT?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by koolz lady (3-26-2005 - 01:44 PM)
| wow, thats really nice, sounds like someone is in love! |
by TheUndeadBlackRose (3-26-2005 - 01:46 PM)
| Aw, how cute. I could never write something like that lol. Nice to actually see a happy poem. =D Keep it up. ~Grey |
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-26-2005 - 01:57 PM)
by xfadingmemoriesx (3-26-2005 - 01:58 PM)
| oh no i submitted an empty comment cause i acciently clicked too fast. >< heh. anyway it's a good poem. x] it's a nice change from all the other depressin and sad poems others write. :) |
by (guest) (3-26-2005 - 03:48 PM)
| I'm just a kid...but Its good^.^ I liked it a I agree its a good change from all the depression and mad crazy poems :-p Anyways yeah its good |
by blackthinker1709 (3-26-2005 - 04:03 PM)
| that was a very good poem lol. i enjoyed it. all good poems have a lot of feeling an urs deffinatly had that. good job! |
by blackthinker1709 (3-26-2005 - 04:04 PM)
| that was a very good poem lol. i enjoyed it. all good poems have a lot of feeling an urs deffinatly had that. good job! |
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