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Pathetic
written by Tainted_Soul_777
09:07 PM 3/26/05
Silence.
Waiting for the phone to ring
Just for one mear second
I would give up everything.
Just to hear you voice
To hear you say you love me
But we dont have a choice
So youll just continue thinking of me.
Me the same for you,
I'll sit here, hopeless again
Waiting for something good to happen
But darkness sees no end.
Not sure what Im searching for
Everything is gone
And now since youre not with me
I truley am alone.
The only one who keeps me going.
My only reason for breath.
Now since you are not with me.
I have nothing left.
So I sit here foolishly
Still thinking, still dreaming
Just to hear your voice for one second
Would be so relieving.
Its slowling killing me
Im dying inside
I could tell you my feelings
And every time I cryed.
Now Im sitting here
Alone all by myself
And now since youre gone
I have nothing left.
Its pretty pathetic
I promised him Id say I was happy
But I never said it.
Its so hard when youre not with me
Its excrusiating for me to try and breathe.
To hold on, Im doing everything I can.
Pathetic,
I know I am.


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by cryptic_misery (3-26-2005 - 09:13 PM)
absolutely beautiful. I can see the imagery and feel the emotion

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