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Ill let you know what after life is like
written by Tainted_Soul_77709:22 PM 3/26/05Ive died
1,000 times
Ive cryed
But youre too soon so ask why
Im whiping away imaginary tears
Ive been fighting Satan for so many years
My hads are frozen, clamy and cold
You dont have enough time for me to tell you the story thats untold
Everyones a lier
Everyone is fake
Everyone has so much crap they have to take.
Everyones life sucks
So whats is the point of caring
Everyone is going through the same shit
So whats the point of sharing.
Everyone is bleeding
Everyone is dead
Youre just thinking youre still living
But thats all in your head.
Its so worthless, why do we even fight.
We can all tell eachother, and find out
What afterlife is like.
I think thats all that needs to be said
Cause really since everyone likes to complain so much, all of us are already dead. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I like this one. Its not how I feel in general, just some feelings needed to be brought to everyones attention. Im not gonna say comment please cause everytime I do only 2 people freakin comment but like 30 people read it so FUCK ALL UNCOMMENTERS! (is that even a word?)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-26-2005 - 11:51 PM)
| wow intense...the viewings not the poem. Lamo the poem rocked tube socks though. Nice one.-Kip |
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