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Protected by Satan
written by EvilTiger02:13 AM 3/27/05I'm the devil's son.
I'm the beast that feeds off fear.
That draws bloody symbols with a razer blade.
The pain takes away the death of many scars that stain the brain with suicide.
I'm the shadow of death.
I'm your deepest fear.
Those who laugh will be cursed with demons from hell.
I'm one of many others who follow the left hand path to the nightmares of death for power. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by spaceageblues (3-27-2005 - 02:37 AM)
| Well, there was a bit of repitition, but the rhythm was good. Very sharp and blunt, as your poem is obviously meant to be. But, I ask a favor of you... I've been reading the bible to see the basic view of Satan and Lucifer, and I think Lucifer was misunderstood... er... and how do you think that Satanism will bring peace? I don't believe in good/evil polarities, but I am a Communist, and I suppose that's looked upon by the toffee-nosed rich gits in the same light as Satanism. Anyway, tell me about it, I'm interested.
My email's on my bio page thingie, but don't send me viruses because I'm poor. Or you could IM me (also on my bio page) or just ... like ... leave a comment. Curiosity burns me. I like the sick and twisted and am shunned for it. |
by BlackRoseX777 (3-27-2005 - 02:51 AM)
| I think you forgot the "d" on curse....just trying to help, anyway it was good. |
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