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You showed me *plz comment*
written by mishy007708:42 AM 3/27/05I smile because you're around
It's like I was lost, but now found
You brought back the old me
and now there is more I can see
I love you and will until the end
You are much more then a boyfriend
You are my life, no one can take it away
Forever in your arms I want to stay
I want to look into your eyes forever
To leave you would be far from clever
You showed me how to live again
and other ways to take out the pain
You showed me another path to walk
You showed me a new way I could talk
Thank you, you saved me from the dark
Between us there is such a strong spark! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm going to try and write happy poems from now on, it will be hard, but I'll try. :) PLEASE COMMENT? I need support. lol.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-27-2005 - 09:37 AM)
| wow i sorta got what you were saying...i mean i dont want to say i kno exactly what you feel...but i love my bf to death and he is my life. and all i want is to be with him! i really liked ur poem a lot |
by xXx.enigma.xXx (3-27-2005 - 09:53 AM)
| heyy...really nice poem...thnx 4 leavin comments on mine!!...take care...xxx |
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