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Heaven *please comment?!?!?*
written by mishy007709:59 AM 3/27/05I smile as I breathe in the sweet air
I know heaven, i was once there
Heaven is just love, behind a cover
It's hard to find, but easy to discover
It's the smile on your loved one's face
It's the sun that takes the moon's place
It's in the eyes of the one you care for
Once you get a little, you want a lot more
It takes away all the troubles you feel
It makes the happy moments seem more real
It takes time to realize where it is hidden
But it certainly isn't a land forbidden |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Another HAPPY one! yay, 4 in a row. he he he. PLEASE COMMENT???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by smashed_heart (3-27-2005 - 10:06 AM)
| i love this poem!!!!keep them coming |
by xXx.enigma.xXx (3-27-2005 - 10:14 AM)
| heyy...really good 1...i loved it!!!!...ur damn good mann!!!...keep it up! |
by skpwf (3-27-2005 - 10:35 AM)
| Very well done! I enjoyed reading this one very much! |
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