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» Poem: last goodbye
last goodbye
written by suicide_penguin
01:20 PM 3/27/05
The first time you said, "i Love you"
The times we shared our feelings
All is out the window now
You threw it all away.

I dont know why I took you back
I guess I thought you cared
You got my name on your body
Just to give my heart another tear.

I fucking gave you everything
And Asked nothing in return
Then I find you talked behind my back

This time the bridge has burned.

You said you had no one else
Everyword out of your mouth was a lie
I was wrong to think you'd never hurt me again
I was right to see our love has died.

I guess I didnt know you at all
And I hope you are happy with what you did start
We have finally reached the end of the line
That knife went through my back and into my heart

I just wanted you to know what you showed me
And the sad part is we cant even be friends
You showed me what we had was all a lie
But thank you for some awesome memories....That will never die

And I guess this is my last goodbye.


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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Up_Angels (3-27-2005 - 05:17 PM)
not many poems bring tears to my eyes ~but now they re running down my cheek my black tears of beauty~ i just lost a boyfriend who did everything in that poem and you have such a great way of putting words into betrayal. im gonna keep u in mind 4ever and always. Jen ~i just cant look its killing me~

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