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i don't know me
written by not_alive_nor_dead05:54 PM 3/27/05think all you want
try to figure me out
but you know what i'm doing now
ime tryinbg to figure myself out
for some reason i don't know myself
i have no idea who i am
i know little things
but the bigs ones ime not sure
ime never going to know
for who i am is only half me
think and when you find out
tell me and you might be right |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
well i don't know who i am but i know what i like
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dreamkillers (3-27-2005 - 05:59 PM)
| i like it, sums me up pretty well too... congrats on a great poem!!!! |
by The Black Halo (3-30-2005 - 12:03 PM)
| Punctuation, spelling, grammar, capitalisation. Have you ever heard fo any of these things? |
by MoodPhilosophy (3-30-2005 - 06:28 PM)
| Boring. Please try again.
-Uli |
by Metal_freak (3-31-2005 - 04:51 PM)
| It was a little short, but to the point you should go back and revise it to tryto make it longer. |
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