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» Poem: pale love
pale love
written by trulybroken57
02:22 PM 3/28/05
watching me, saving me,
as clear, green seas envelope me,
drown me in the feeling.
warmth is slowly creeping in,
while arms are being held around me,
protecting me from the pain
chained and hung inside.....
i'm shaking now,
let us freeze these moments in time,
time i don't deserve,
this never hurt so good.....
soft melodies surround me
and i'm falling.......
descending out of loneliness,
leaving darkness behind,
hiding from the pain
for these few short hours
as time is running away,
running away with precious memories,
forever engraved upon my heart.
ppale love is floating,
never leaving....
always raining tears of redemption,
recovering hope once lost.
missing a peice inside,
what is left to find?
nothing remains untouched,
untouched by silent wonder,
gently catching me as i fall......
never losing faith,
i believe in you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this probably wont make too much sense to anyone but me.....
please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by Poptartz (3-28-2005 - 02:28 PM)
*weeps* i believe in you too! lol jk beautimus poem

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