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wake up [please read]
written by trulybroken5708:12 PM 3/28/05waking up from mindless sleep,
dreaming of horror alone,
screaming in all the fear,
no one's here,
i'm left to peices on the floor.
wake up!
do you see the pain inside?
just let me fall apart,
as my last breath
escapes from the binding chains.
close your eyes,
try to hide from the demon inside,
seeing through the tired mask,
i can only take so much,
can only sleep so long.........
wasting away without the love
so close, but yet so far,
bleeding in a crimson haze,
crying and screaming,
can you hear me now?
do you enjoy the thoughts,
the thoughts ripping me apart inside,
are you smiling as i die,
slowly killing myself,
in the dark i hear a voice.......
tell me it's ok,
they can't take me away,
feed me lies
and soothe my heart,
just kiss the ache away.......
wake up!
yelling and shouting your name,
you can't hear the silent tears
that own my every night,
you can't see the crimson regret
falling on the floor.
as flowing liquid fragments
lie shattered on the ground,
doubt overcoming my mind,
will you save me now?
will you find the way?
haunting voices fill the air,
alone now i stand,
fighting off the empty end,
please tell me it's alright
when you wake up......
wake up from the nightmares within,
taking over your soul,
wasting you away,
leaving you spent and broken,
can you save me?
wake up........... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i know itz long.........sorry......
please comment, i barely ever get any commentz........please.......?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fireangelelemental (3-28-2005 - 08:14 PM)
by DemonSlayerSango (3-28-2005 - 08:15 PM)
| That was really good! You wrote that? You did a great job on it . Quite sad though, but still..i enjoyed reading this poem. |
by XxShadowedSuicidexX (3-28-2005 - 08:33 PM)
| sweet poem... i can relate to it completly... o ya just so ya know.. u aint alone..
jess |
by XxShadowedSuicidexX (3-28-2005 - 08:33 PM)
| sweet poem... i can relate to it completly... o ya just so ya know.. u aint alone..
jess |
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