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» Poem: Letting go of you
Letting go of you
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
12:56 AM 3/29/05
Say how you feel,
I know I can take it.
All this pain is real,
but I have to make it.
It hurts so bad,
to know you care so little.
You've made me eternally sad,
and from something so simple.
It's not that I want to marry you,
and have your kids.
I love you yes that's true,
but I just want to be friends.
I want all these poem about you,
to just stop overflowing.
Because the more I write about what you,
the harder it is to keep going.
I want to foget we were as close as we were,
then there will be nothing to miss...
But it's hard because I know for sure,
that what we had was bliss.
So im trying to let go,
of everything we EVER had.
Because it hurts worse than you know,
that heartbrake is all I have.


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» Comments / Feedback
by daughterofdarkness (3-29-2005 - 01:03 AM)
It's a beautiful poem. Take a look at mine!

by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 01:11 AM)
cassy, its mary. i like this poem. i think its bullshyt that cody dislikes you just because your friends with sarah....i dont understand how he can hate the person he once loved, and hate the closest person he was to. hopefully he'll come around for both of your stakes. well, I love you anyway!! :-)

by LonelyIsGreen (3-29-2005 - 01:36 AM)
WoW..thats how I felt for the longest time and sometimes still do. That poem is awesome..I totally relate.

by Complicated_Life (4-1-2005 - 08:20 AM)
Cody is so freakin GAY like mary sed he luved me and he was so close to you... i have NO IDEA how he can just hate us...??

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