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This thing we call "life"
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk04:52 AM 3/29/05Sick of waking up into a world of lies,
opening my eyes,
to see nothing but cloudy skies.
Act like everything is fine,
when im tearin up inside,
but no one really minds,
Cause everyone gets pissed off time to time.
But when you take it out on man kind,
that's when you need to step back in line.
And just take a sign,
one person can cause so many cries.
So many problems people have to face,
things we question every single day.
Wondering what we're doing in this place,
if we dissapeared would there even be a trace?
Sometimes ya get annoyed and it's to much to take,
people need to respect everybody's space.
This world has become such a huge discrace.
So much crap going on it's hard to have faith.
falling in love everyday wondering what is fate.
Everyone's self absorbed it's hard setting people straight.
Sometimes I wonder am I just too late?
There's so little love and so much fights.
All these missing children more everynight.
Rapist and murderers in our sight.
We're so confused whats wrong and what's right.
Hope someday we can all see the light,
that this God is shinning so bright,
trying to hold all of us tight.
We need to think twice,
and be changed by things as simple as this write.
I'll do my best and hang on with all my might.
By the problems that confuse this thing we call life. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I really tried hard on this one each verse has 11 rhyming words
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 05:01 AM)
| =-D :) :-D :D WOW! haha smilies....THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!! LOVE IT! TRUTH IS GREAT AND THIS HAS A LOT OF THAT IN IT! ITS AWESOME! YOU NEED TO KEEP WRITIN POETRY LIKE THIS!! IT IS AWESOME AS HELL I AM MADLY HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE!.....IM FRICKEN COMMENTING YOU LITTLE LOSER! I AM THE FRICKEN 5TH PERSON SO U CAN JUST STOP COMPLAINING TO ME ABOUT NO ONE COMMENTING! WELL IM GOING TO GO NOW...THIS IS MARY IN CASE YOU HAVENT CAUGHT ON TO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-29-2005 - 06:17 AM)
| wow. this is an outstanding poem. i am proud of you |
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