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Priceless
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk05:43 AM 3/29/05See your smile,
hear your laugh,
stay for a while,
you're all I have.
Play a little bit,
flirt a whole lot,
see what I get,
You're all I got.
Mess around more,
but not with me.
It's different then before,
I made you my need.
Do something stupid,
this thing called love...
look what you do to it,
it's never enough.
Took a break,
for way too long,
for God sake,
what's going on?
Reunited,
recalling what I felt,
you made me so excited,
and caused my heart to melt.
Everything I thought was true,
you fuck around alot.
But No matter what I love you,
being without you... an option it's not.
Your valentines day gift,
20 bucks out of my pocket,
15 dollars for your picture in my locket.
Hearing you speak,
even when it's meaningless,
to me,
that's priceless.. |
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lol this ones lame
ErIc D
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 06:02 AM)
by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 06:04 AM)
| this is mary, I LIKE THIS POEM. its great. wow lovely. i copied it down....on paper....that took a while but i like this poem a lot i was going to copy the other one that u just posted but....its quite long.....and so i did this one. i like this poem a lot tho cas its really good. you should go another couple days without writing then...write again that seemed to work pretty well! |
by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 06:06 AM)
| O.M.G. this poem reminds me of this guy i like named Jeremy it doesnt matter what he says to me...i love it anyway! Keep up the great work! |
by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 06:09 AM)
| Well.....It did get a little shaky in the middle, but all in all I really enjoyed the context of this poem. IM me sometime on GCloverbaby28 sometime and maybe I can teach you how to have a steady flow through your whole poem! |
by Tainted_Soul_777 (3-29-2005 - 06:17 AM)
| ahhh...lol another one of your many wonderful poems....but i have to ask
ERIC D????? |
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