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When you fall in love...
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk08:27 AM 3/29/05You think you found the one,
who meets your every need.
Who makes you heart fludder unconditionally.
The person who makes you smile,
when they can make you miserable.
Even then they seem irresistable.
Someone who's beautiful on the inside and out.
Looks amazing, and has never acted mean...
but things aren't always how they seem.
They can become something you need, in order to survive.
They're the medicine to help you get by,
the cure to keep you alive.
Hurting you so greatly,
but they are the only one who can heal,
the only one who seems real.
Not fake or adjusted in any way.
They come off perfect and it be great if they were.
But everything has faults, heartbrake is the worse.
Don't fall for the first being you see walking past,
It can only cause you pain,
forever it will remain... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mishy0077 (3-29-2005 - 08:55 AM)
| wow. nice one. I hope rory doesnt break my heart, or its back to the cuttin for me. lol. good poem! |
by sexy_shorty (3-29-2005 - 02:59 PM)
| you said all of it. i can connect to that really well. i've thought that before, i was very wrong, the basterd. sorry i still have many issues with him. |
by (guest) (3-29-2005 - 04:03 PM)
| hahaha she said BASTARD ^^ that was amusing. dude when i read this my jaw dropped i was like WHOA that was an awesome poem! :-D im so proud of you cassy! and if u stop writing poems now im going to...kill you!!! mwhahahah! keep writin kick ass poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is mary by the way.....okay bye now! |
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