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My Former Best Friend *plz comment*
written by mishy007708:52 AM 3/29/05The razor blade was once my best friend
I thought our friendship would never end
But one day it betrayed me, it didnt help the pain
Just made scars appear reminding me each day
So I turned to the only person I trust
The only person who could mend the rust
The only person who cared about how I felt
Warm inside his arms, my icy cover starts to melt
I confessed it all that one dreadful day
All his attention suddenly turned my way
He wouldn't rest until I helped myself get better
He made me go see her, but we went together
Now the razor is sitting there, all alone, dead
It will still be there when I choose to wed |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Ummm, just sumthing I thought up. In my mind its a kinda songy thingy if u get wat i mean. lol. PLEASE COMMENT???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-29-2005 - 08:59 AM)
| It should be former instead of old. |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-29-2005 - 09:16 AM)
| Hey u changed it cool! Nice poem! |
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