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Feel It
written by sarah1008712:08 PM 3/29/05Feel the ripple beneath my skin
Feel the heat, which i keep within
Feel the tension, feel the power
As You hold on me for an hour
Feel the blood as it trickles down
Feel it, making not a sound.
Feel the strength, feel the passion,
As we do this doggy fashion.
Feel my tremour from your touch
Feel my fatigue from moving too much
Feel the sweat, feel the power
As we take this to the shower.
Feel me stumble on the soap
Feel my hair begining to soak
Feel the water, feel the steam
As our organs start to stream. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-29-2005 - 12:13 PM)
| omg. it's so good. a great change from other poems others write. uhm yeah. x] i love it. |
by butcakes (3-29-2005 - 01:48 PM)
| though i cant appreciate the theme, i think its composed and structured wonderfully... you presented your feelings and emotions beautifully... top work. |
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