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» Poem: my unfortuate life....(plz comment)
my unfortuate life....(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me
03:18 PM 3/29/05
They always come up to me
tease me
push me
i go home
wish there was somewhere else to go
but that wud be farthers
he hit mother
cant go
did he hit me? i cant tell.......
he bruises they hurt
with farther,freedom!!
but i cant
one way around it...
...picked up knife
slid it along my wrists,fainted
hospital
mothers fusing
got home
and here i am now....
this is my unfortunate life


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ok i just wrote this
and its very true so plz comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkangel04 (3-29-2005 - 03:24 PM)
omg i so can relate to that my step mom used to beat me and i cut to get the pain out io hope that your has gotten better and that you dont cut anymore u2u me back if you want to chat

by sweet_tender_kisses (3-29-2005 - 03:31 PM)
i know exactly what u r going through or have gone through u2u me if u wish to talk more

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