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move me *plz comment*
written by mishy007708:43 AM 3/30/05You light up my day
In every single way
You complete me
You made me see
I cant take life for granted
But my roots are planted
It will take a lot to move me away from here
But it will totaly be worth all the sweat and tear |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
la la la. not sure wtf its about but i like it a bit. :) no sad poems yet. ha ha ha. im good. lol. PLEASE COMMENT???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xfadingmemoriesx (3-30-2005 - 08:43 AM)
by (guest) (3-30-2005 - 09:02 AM)
| its so sweet, i liked it, and i normaly dont like poetry |
by butcakes (3-30-2005 - 09:30 AM)
| this has a positive sting to it which brings a smiling feeling to my insides... i can relate to this one, i guess thats why i like it; but its soo good!! ;) |
by darkness_follows_me (3-30-2005 - 09:44 AM)
| i really liked that one,keep it up |
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