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Pain of remembering(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me09:37 AM 3/30/05Pain has taken me away from myself
I can't see straight
I just feel hurt
I can't go on like this
The darkness is falling around me
My will is breaking away
My mind is being ripped to shreds
They will not remember me
They cannot remember me
I won't let them remember
I cause them pain
I can't let them go
I have to destroy this
The only way is to destroy myself |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
well this is my latest poem,and these are my feelings,so plz tell me what u think of my poem
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| » Comments / Feedback | by wind_wanderer (3-30-2005 - 09:49 AM)
| damn, thats a really good poem! keep it up =) |
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