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You again *plz comment*
written by mishy007709:46 AM 3/30/05You sing me a sweet lullabye
As I start to wonder why
You're leaning over my bed
Cradeling my injured head
Slowly stitching up my heart
All the troubles begin to start
I dream of you here with me
And how there are things I can't see
I want to grab you by the neck
Make you see things things you wreck
All the things you tore apart,
cmon, we'll begin at the start
First you made me afraid of love
But I got over that fear, like a free dove
Secondly you made me cry myself to sleep
Thirdly you made me cut myself down deep |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I would finish it, but my sis is kickin me off the comp! I COULDNT HELP WRITIN A SAD POEM! Sorry Rory :( PLEASE COMMENT PEOPLE???
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| » Comments / Feedback | by darkness_follows_me (3-30-2005 - 09:47 AM)
| wow,i loved that,i can relate to it so much,keep it up!!!=) |
by wind_wanderer (3-30-2005 - 09:56 AM)
| gr8 poem, i can reallly relate to it. |
by butcakes (3-30-2005 - 09:59 AM)
| touching. emotions are really conveyed well and im drawn into the situation... ;) |
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