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Darkness darkness(comment plz)
written by darkness_follows_me08:05 PM 3/30/05People say darkness is decieving
and darkness is empty
but i love darkness
so from light i flee
i sit alone with darkness
locked up in my room
where nobody can hear me
i sing a peaceful tune
I lie alone in darkness
though i cannot drift into dreams
darkness keeps me in a trance
he wont let me go it seems
I cry alone in darkness
and darkness hugs me tight
he comforts me and holds me
all through every night
so thats why i love darkness
he's always there for me
and if i look into the heart of darkness
its myself that i see.... |
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i think i sed darkness bit to much,but plz comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ashesinmypath71 (3-30-2005 - 08:10 PM)
| I thought it was really good, i think i might have misundrstood, but the way i'm gettin it, it sounds good |
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