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When i died(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me08:18 PM 3/30/05When I died
The blood of countless years ran dry
The tears of people young and old
Filled the heavens basins full
When I died
I could no longer hear
The leaves rustling
The wind caressing
Eyes staring
When I died
The walls were bleeding
Dark red stains spreading down…
Down and out
Blackening out the window panes
Tinting the light a gory scarlet
When I died
Black sticky blood
Rolled down the white bricks
In oppressive balled globs of spilled life
Seeping through the cracks
And holes
Bleeding until a pool was born
Rising and bubbling
The walls bled
Drowning me in finality
Encompassing my last memories in hazy crimson
When I died
The walls bled
And the blood rose to take me home. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
felt depressed...wrote a poem...such is life....comment please....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lostlove5050 (3-30-2005 - 08:21 PM)
by crimsonregret (3-30-2005 - 08:27 PM)
by (guest) (3-30-2005 - 08:31 PM)
| i loved it!!!!!i felt like i knew what you were feeling !!!!!!!! |
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