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» Poem: mirrored soul [faceless]
mirrored soul [faceless]
written by trulybroken57
11:02 PM 3/30/05
calling me,
pretending to know my name,
who are you?
let me see your face,
the face of one who destroys me
with every move i make,
the eyes that bruise my soul
every time i see myself..........
staring into my mirrored soul,
i can only wonder,
can you see yourself?
see the ashes burning everything.....
leaving nothing behind........
moving forward,
walking slowly, turning back often,
i am scared.......
fearing the darkened shadows of night,
watching with faceless terror
as i fade away,
melting into the bloody masses,
lying shattered at your feet,
don't let me spill a drop,
a drop of crimson pain
on the purity of your life,
just drop the knife,
come on, just drop the knife,
let it fall on me,
stabbing a waste of life...........
gazing at the mirror,
i cannot see my face,
only streams of hurtful tears
drowning the world again.......
dropping the knife,
shattering the mirror,
broken shards pierce my soul tonight................


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please comment.............[even though it sux...o well........]

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» Comments / Feedback
by Emo.style. (3-30-2005 - 11:03 PM)
none of your poems suck! now if you wanna see poetry that SUX! look at mine...lol

by Emo.style. (3-30-2005 - 11:03 PM)
none of your poems suck! now if you wanna see poetry that SUX! look at mine...lol

by last_only (3-30-2005 - 11:31 PM)
how DARE you think that sucks! just kidding, it's really good.

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