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Blood tear *plz comment*
written by mishy007708:22 AM 3/31/05Your tears of blood, streaming down your face,
Will these words finally put you in your place?
Will you finally see all the harm you have become?
Will your head be cleared, will you no longer be dumb?
Open up your eyes, see the damage you have made
Open them wide watch all these torn souls start to fade
You destroyed this life and all that live here
Not one person living is without a blood tear |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
dunno where it came from, just need to write. PLEASE COMMENT?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloody_tears_girl (3-31-2005 - 08:25 AM)
| omg, its amazing you can write somthin just like that, i love it! |
by bloodlyvalentine (3-31-2005 - 10:14 AM)
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