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» Poem: Drifting from your love
Drifting from your love
written by SuperBob
09:45 PM 7/31/04
I don't know what's happening to me
This feeling isn't what it used to be
I am only able to say this much is true
I honestly hope I still love you

Our conversations are always so halfassed
Maybe it's because I've given up at last
I know that I would suffer with out you there
But I felt so good just last year

Times before when I lied to myself
I was able to get by with good health
I dreamt of you just last night
And that has given me some extra fight

I will get by these days one way
I just hope I end up with you some day
I can't gaurantee this time that it's what I want
But I hope my dreams you'll forever haunt


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
okie so i didnt exactly end up writing about what i wanted to....but i am kinda drifting away from that feeling i had...but then the feeling comes back stronger than ever...and well...i dont know

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» Comments / Feedback
by Emma! (7-31-2004 - 10:24 PM)
wow!!! That's brilliant, i like the last lines. It is just how i'm feeling too.

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