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written by darkness_follows_me03:38 PM 4/1/05| Sometimes in the darkness of my room i just cant help but think about how i would die if i could choose. Sometimes I'm just so mad i want to die. Do you know the only thing that keeps me alive is my friends and family. Even though i think i have none. people just make you want to die, but really i am dead, inside anyway. The only reason i don't kill myself is because there are people who follow me what a great example that would be. So i just watch the blood poor out onto the floor and it relieves me and no one will ever know the pain i go through. Everyone always says hurtful things and they don't think they hurt but they hurt so bad i just want to die. people can be so mean and hateful. Most of the time they say they are just kidding, but even though i laugh at myself i am really breaking. I just want something big to happen. if you know what i mean. Every day just to make it through the day i put on a mask no one really knows my true identity! no one will ever know what i feel everyday. all the things people say build up and then i just break! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by c.miller (4-1-2005 - 03:50 PM)
| that is really good and a great way to say your feelings is through poetry |
by Rain.Life (4-1-2005 - 04:55 PM)
| Thats an awsome poem. You really know how to express your self through poetry. |
by (guest) (4-1-2005 - 05:24 PM)
| hey.. i TOTALLY understand, ive got the SAME prolem... its SOO hard on me.. like.. you feel like noboy can see the pain.. or the shit your going through.. its screwed up.. my parents dont even see it.. and you try to hide it from your friends.. well hey, if you want to e-mail me. my addy is Stupid_blonde_88@hotmail.com |
by So_Totaly_alone (4-1-2005 - 07:23 PM)
| Hey I know EXACTLY how u feel. I do the same thing EVERY day. No one knows the pain u go through , or when they say bad things they think its jus fun and games , but inside it kills you and ur mind starts turning agianst you. The only reason ur alive is cause ur friends and family even though u feel alone , even though u know ur not. It may not be the same 4 u as it is me , but thats how it is for me. U can go check out my other poems and c wut u think.
Alone |
by So_Totaly_alone (4-1-2005 - 07:23 PM)
| Hey I know EXACTLY how u feel. I do the same thing EVERY day. No one knows the pain u go through , or when they say bad things they think its jus fun and games , but inside it kills you and ur mind starts turning agianst you. The only reason ur alive is cause ur friends and family even though u feel alone , even though u know ur not. It may not be the same 4 u as it is me , but thats how it is for me. U can go check out my other poems and c wut u think.
Alone |
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