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Nothing *plz comment?*
written by mishy007704:11 AM 4/2/05I open my eyes, i turn around
watching, not making a sound
Hoping you're near
Hoping you're here
Dreaming of the day I get to hold you again
All these mixed feelings I can not explain
I need to look into your deep dark eyes
I need you to erase all these ugly lies
But I mean nothing to you, nothing at all
And you always watch everytime I fall
You're not here with me once again
leaving me to deal with this pain
I close my eyes, go back to my dreams
Nothing is right at all here as it seems |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm in such a rhyming mood! :D PLEASE COMMENT?
Even tho im not rlly sure what this poem is about i still feel it. maybe its my subconsious telling me sumthing.... creepy pLEASE cOMMENT?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by darth_vader_in_hell (4-2-2005 - 06:51 AM)
| don't feel this pain no more for when all is lost the lord will always help you once more to carry you when you fall. |
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