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» Poem: Make It Worse
Make It Worse
written by SuperBob
03:03 AM 8/2/04
That saying..."Way to kick a dog while it's already down"....
It comes across as being abad thing to add to despiar when someone is hurting
But personally why would you want to destroy someone's happiness when you can just get it out while they are unhappy?

Don't try to protect me if I feel unwell
Don't say you would rather wait to give me bad news
Once I've hit rock bottom with emotions, I can't drop anymore
If I feel happy...let me hold onto that illusion for a while
You know it doesn't come often for me...
Let me cherish it while I can
If you are going to protect me...tell me everything at once
I do better like that as opposed to being happy you snatching that away


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dunno....i just...i dont know...it bugs me when people wait for you to be happy to tell you bad news...like why destroy a good thing...if its already bad why not just let them deal with everything instead of letting them get happy only to make them feel like shit again?

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by (anonymous) (8-2-2004 - 06:06 AM)
hi im chickeyrock@aol.com and ur poems are reaaly good -kym

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