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Atleast I Didn't Win
written by SuperBob03:12 AM 8/2/04Sometimes it's good to win
Sometimes you'd rather lose
To win with you would mean you admit defeat
To win with me would mean that I give in
Sometimes it's good to walk
Sometimes you'd rather run
To walk with you would mean you are a friend
To walk with me would mean I will always be there
Sometimes it's good to accomplish
Sometimes you'd rather give up
To accomplish with you says you can be a team-mate
To accomplish with me says I need all the help I can get
Sometimes it's good to struggle and pass
Sometimes you'd rather take it easy and fail
To struggle and pass with you would be a proud moment
To struggle and pass with me would be a strengthening time
Sometimes it's good to hate
Sometimes you'd rather just love
To hate with you would be unnerving
To hate with me would be my success
All in all...atleast I didn't win and lose you to myself |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it doesnt really work all that well...really crappy if you ask me...but whatever...i dont really know what i was getting at...it all went to hell when i started typing...but...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-2-2004 - 06:39 AM)
| this poem was good ...i liked it
-kym p . CA |
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