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» Poem: I'm Sorry
I'm Sorry
written by AthiestAnarchist
01:12 PM 4/3/05
I'm sorry for yesterday
I wish I could forget the past
I wish yesterday had ended fast

I'm sorry for yesterday
I wish I could have talked to you about why I was mad
I wish that I wouldn't have ended up so sad

I'm sorry for yesterday
I wish I could have told you I didn't like what you told her
I wish I didn't feel like I wanted to walk up the street and kill her

I'm sorry for yesterday
I wish that I could just talk to you
I wish that I knew what I could do

I'm sorry for yesterday
I wish it had never happened
I wish that I could just undo what everyone did

I'm sorry for yesterday
I'm sorry that I wished that I was dead
I'm sorry that I thought that I was loosing you
Just because of my age
I wish that I could get out of this cage
Rage
I'm trapped inside
Now I feel guilt...I wish I had more time
I'm sorry that I didn't give you a sign
I can't say what is all on my mind
I wish that I could say, "I love you"
I wish that I knew what to do
I need to talk to you....you don't know how much
I want to say that right now I need to feel your touch
I'm sorry for yesterday....
But it doesn't look like today is going to be any better


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
If you'd like to leave comments I'd really like that .... I wrote this because yesterday I didn't tell my boyfriend why I was mad and I feel bad about it....

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» Comments / Feedback
by Bria_360 (4-3-2005 - 02:19 PM)
Really nice poem so sad the way you say i'm sorry.

by demented_vampire (4-3-2005 - 05:00 PM)
aww. its so sad. makes me want to cry. :'( but its a good poem. ~*KRIS*~

by poorgirl42 (4-3-2005 - 06:31 PM)
im sry if this happen to you but the poem is a great

by Ruined_Hopes (4-3-2005 - 07:35 PM)
i agree with everyone else, your poem is really good. and i hope you and your bf are okay now.

by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 03:43 PM)
yeah, i'm sorry too

by Fallen_Angel_666 (4-9-2005 - 03:52 PM)
thanks for commenting on my poem, this poem is really good:) unlike me you have alot of talent:D

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