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» Poem: you have me(comment dudes!)
you have me(comment dudes!)
written by darkness_follows_me
03:05 PM 4/3/05
Now that you have me,
Now that I am yours,
You can do what you wish,
I am just here to love you.

You sucked out my soul,
And swallowed it down,
You make me bleed,
It's how I hurt for you.

I don't think you realise,
Just how you make me feel,
A world so far away,
Where nothing is real.

Part of me hates you,
For what you have done,
But i know that I love it,
I just can't admit.

It's just a dark feeling you unearth,
You think you can control,
And you can,
You have me.


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» Comments / Feedback
by rammstein-freak (4-3-2005 - 03:21 PM)
wow, that poem rokked =)

by Igby (4-3-2005 - 05:53 PM)
Very nice

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