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god, please help me
written by i_love_sandy04:20 PM 8/2/04god please help me
I need you so
to clear up the pain the sadness and woe
I pray that he's okay
I pray that he's well
I pray that the scars of pain on him wont swell
I love him truly, I really do
but I'm scared that he'l leave me
what shall I do?
my eyes keep bleeding
and the sadness is still here
but why cant I see him
because the devil is near |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is a poem I wrote for kahno... again.the very last sentence thingy is supposed to be god speaking. its when I thought he was cheating on me I almost started believing in the devil. but now I know that he will never do a thing like that. he is perfect and I love him.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (8-4-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| Wow... that's an excellent poem... it makes me feel sad but appy at the same time because you wrote something so beautiful just for me *huggles* |
by Trapezium (8-4-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| Wow... that's an excellent poem... it makes me feel sad but happy at the same time... because you wrote something so beautiful just for me *huggles* |
by Trapezium (8-4-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| Wow... that's an excellent poem... it makes me feel sad but happy at the same time... because you wrote something so beautiful just for me *huggles* |
by Trapezium (8-4-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| Wow... that's an excellent poem... it makes me feel sad but happy at the same time... because you wrote something so beautiful just for me *huggles* |
by Trapezium (8-4-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| Wow... that's an excellent poem... it makes me feel sad but happy at the same time... because you wrote something so beautiful just for me *huggles* |
by i_love_sandy (8-12-2004 - 02:03 AM)
| god kahno, enough of the same comments. hehe. |
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