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» Poem: Another suicidle teen
Another suicidle teen
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
04:50 AM 4/4/05
The mother hits,
screams at me "bitch.!"
Complains about how bad I am,
never tries to understand.
The dad is dying in her home,
leaving his little girl on her own.
The only one she ever had,
was the only one she could ever call dad.
The brother is never there.
He's running around with some girl, some where.
Ignores his sister and her cries,
wont pay attention untill she dies.
The friends get mad cause she's depressed.
All upset and so damn stressed.
But they don't understand she cant help it.
So numb she wouldent know pysical pain if she felt it.
Expeirenced death and expeirenced birth.
She knows emotional pain for what it's worth.
Lost loved one's including best friends.
Is fighting for life, and fighting for it to end.
Her heart just keeps on braking,
and living becomes acheing.
To everyone over looking thing are unseen.
You all think of me as just another suicidle teen.


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» Comments / Feedback
by OpenUrEyesAlone (4-4-2005 - 04:58 AM)
hey i like this...do you have any others? i have a web site that i put poems on, check it out, its in my profile.

by bloody_tears_girl (4-4-2005 - 05:14 AM)
i love your work! it's sad, but really fucking good!!!

by babi_afta (4-4-2005 - 07:03 AM)
i soo agree w/ bloody_tears_girl sooo right.. ur a real GOOd poet~!~!

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