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My Love For You (please comment)
written by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx06:23 AM 4/4/05I see you everyday
Your beautiful hair shining in the sun
You are always there when I need you
You tell me I won't feel alone
And my heart races at your very voice
Because you are my reason to live now
And on a pale moonlit night
I look into those eyes and see another world
Your soul
So innocent
So pure
I never want to lose you
My sweet dove
Every kiss
Every touch
Is just as special as the last
And I want to share the world with you
Love, stay true for eternity
A kiss to you on the coldest of nights to keep you warm... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Ahhh... expression is purely beautiful
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-4-2005 - 06:26 AM)
| i thought ur poem was beautiful. its the kind of poem that makes the reader wish it was for them. |
by soul_soother (4-4-2005 - 07:19 AM)
| wow your poem is really pretty |
by goth_freak (4-4-2005 - 05:59 PM)
| I liked your poem a lot!!!:) |
by butterflykai (4-5-2005 - 12:27 AM)
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (4-5-2005 - 02:23 AM)
by Hell_Bitch_22 (4-19-2005 - 04:14 AM)
| Man i wish i could rite like that... I loved it. It really makes the reader wish it was written to them. |
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