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» Poem: All of this for you!!!!!
All of this for you!!!!!
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
06:32 AM 4/4/05
I lay there crying,
ofcourse over you.
I'd rather be dying,
then do what I do.
Cutting away,
and wathcing myself bleed.
It's adciting I say,
It''s not a want it's a need!
But that's what you,
have become to me.
Living without you,
is living unbareably.
You brake my heart,
each time you dont speak.
My insides pull apart,
and suicide takes a peak.
That's the perfect solution,
I think happily.
This is my resolution,
of all my misery.
The rope is tied,
onto the above bar.
This is for when I lied,
saying "it's not too hard."
I put the noose,
around my neck.
No time to loose,
I pray I wont come back.
Then suddenly,
saftey calls.
The rope starts loosining,
and I fall.
The bar broke,
and now I gasp.
I start to choke,
that happend so fast.
I think to myself,
for a moment.
What about everyone else?
Seems selfish now don't it?
I rub my throat,
thinking of what I tried to do.
I even left a suicide note,
I did all of this for you....


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» Comments / Feedback
by sheded_tears (4-4-2005 - 06:34 AM)
this is a beautiful poem... i really love it. I can relate to it exactly after all ive done something like that before over a guy... well it is pretty.

by zver (4-4-2005 - 06:44 AM)
are u that one chick who like umm had some dude die and then was really ticked about stuff

by CROSS+CUTTER (4-4-2005 - 06:46 AM)
I really like it.

by soul_soother (4-4-2005 - 07:17 AM)
your poem is HOT!!

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