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» Poem: just one more scar [please read]
just one more scar [please read]
written by trulybroken57
11:03 PM 4/4/05
crying, bleeding, stinging......
what have i done?
broken promises lay shattered
among the crimson death dotting my skin,
no, i'm not okay!

lying as you softly ask
the deadly question, pinning me down,
don't cry for me,
i'll be fine............

just one more scar,
just one more secret to keep
threatening me with every breath,
this pain is crushing me,
and i pick up the razor once more.......

silently screaming in depression,
no one needs to know
the truth behind the smiles
as i throw out the pills
and turn to my blood again.........

please forgive me..................


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i'm sorry...........i couldnt do it............
please comment.............

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by bloody_tears_girl (4-4-2005 - 11:59 PM)
i know how you feel, very cool poem, keep up the good work!

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