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Forgeting you(be nice comment)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
09:11 AM 4/5/05
Im trying to move on,
im trying to forget.
It's jus so hard knowing,
that this is it.
That all I have worked for,
doesn't matter a bit.
I hate saying I don't care anymore,
because that isn't it.
The truth is I care too much,
too much to let you go.
But all of this,
is things you'll never know.
Because all I ever was to you,
was just another girl,
another you could use,
and ruin her whole world.
But why did it have to be me?
And why did you do it to Sarah too?
I still want you to be happy,
it's only because I care about you.
Sure you killed me inside,
and ruined my entire life.
But when you said we were good friends,
and I agreed.
You should of ment that till the end,
it shoulden't only be me.


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by death_angel513 (4-5-2005 - 09:28 AM)
\m/(^.^)\m/

by Sharrain (4-5-2005 - 09:48 AM)
i know how you feel. this is really good, better than i could ever put it.

by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 03:24 PM)
that was really touching and true andi kno how you feel too

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