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It wont be too long(suicide)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk05:46 PM 4/5/05I stay up listening to heartbraking songs.
Writing poems all night long.
Expressing my sadness in everyway I can,
why can't you just understand?
I go to bed and streams run down,
my smile is turned upside down.
The feeling I felt before,
is gone and returning no more.
You've turned me cold is everyway possible,
this pain is just untolerable.
I try to sleep I keep waking up,
pain I guess isn't enough.
I fall asleep,
but not to deep.
I stir agian,
I cry and never ends.
I try to go back to bed,
but there's this pounding in my head.
An acheing in my heart,
my insides tear apart.
I rip of the covers and go get my blade.
Time to end this love cherade.
I cut away,
and hide the pain.
But it's unbearable it hurts so bad,
im sort of upset but kind of glad.
I don't know what's happening or what's going on,
I just know from now it wont be too long. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
sorry it sux :(
but comments are appreciated
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| » Comments / Feedback | by brokenxsmile (4-5-2005 - 05:48 PM)
| omg, that poem rocks my socks! lol, awesome poem, i love love love it! keep it up! |
by ihavenoname01234 (4-5-2005 - 06:12 PM)
| Wow, I love your poem and could really relate to it. Good job! |
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