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razor...........
written by trulybroken5712:27 AM 4/6/05tearing me apart,
screaming in blood-red pain,
get the knife and cut it out,
spare me of my tearless nights.........
sharp as the razor,
soothing as the blood,
i'm living on the razor's edge,
falling as liquid peices of me
are spilling to the floor,
flooding my dreams in a crimson nightmare,
all the while smiling sweetly,
watching as the pain is flowing out
and bittersweet words fill the air,
breaking me down,
cutting out the pain,
laughing as i fade away.........
exhausted now,
i close my eyes,
drifting off ito the sleepless night.......
what will you do now?
as angry, red cuts stare up at me,
marking me forever
as sorrow's captive slave,
loyal to the razor,
living in a miserable haze.......
hidden now, my silver relief
will comfort me tomorrow.
lying in this numbing emptiness,
painlessly cutting out the anger,
leaving me spent and broken,
alone in the dark........... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
*sigh* depression.............
please comment...............
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-6-2005 - 12:43 AM)
| UGGH!!!
after the first five lines i wanted to throw up!
are you trying to get attention with that "poem" or whatever you call it?
you suck!!! |
by (guest) (4-6-2005 - 12:44 AM)
| i didn't really mean that comment, i guess your poem's not that bad. but it's not good either! |
by XxXlost_girl_in_loveXxX (4-6-2005 - 01:00 AM)
| wow that is good i can relate i hate cutting but its what i've gotten addicted to and i just cant stop but keep up the good work.......and guest fuck u u dont know what we go through |
by perfect.flaws (4-6-2005 - 01:08 AM)
| wow. that was amazing. awesome job. your words are my feelings exactly. |
by LonelyIsGreen (4-6-2005 - 01:26 AM)
by (guest) (4-8-2005 - 06:35 PM)
| omg, u, first guest, u r so retarded. |
by (guest) (4-8-2005 - 06:46 PM)
| ok, yeah, seriously, u first guest, u r in desperate need of the shutting up skill. have you read any of her other poems? well read them, and then u decide whether its an attention call or not. |
by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 09:03 PM)
| you remind me of me....if you ever get bored and wanna chat IM me some time...RrandomMagic420 later babe and keep up the good work...oh...and guest 1...you suck so shove it up your rude little ass... |
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