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» Poem: grim is my best friend,luv u kahno
grim is my best friend,luv u kahno
written by i_love_sandy
06:17 PM 8/3/04
grim isnt good
I like him like I should
he is really dark
I met him in the park
I saw him just lying there
he looked wierd, with no hair
I told him I need love
he didnt send me up above
he told me that he'll try his best
he looked for my love
but I said I'll do the rest
we became friends and I looked on this site
I took a quiz while writing my deathly shite
I got the results with an email address
and of course kahno you know the rest
we started talking and became freinds
then we fell in love and it washed all the dreads
I told grim about it and he said congrats
then I talked to him again and I noticed acouple rats
I thought he was cheating and he really wasnt
I called him bad names and I realized I shouldnt
he wasnt cheating, I felt so dumb
I developed anorexia, I only ate a crumb
I hope its not too late, I love him so
he is really sweet and kind you know
I hope he forgives me, and throws it all behind
he is my everything and anyhting, he is all mine

I love you kahno


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ah, another poem for kahno about kahno. I love him sooooo much. I am a bad poet, a really bad poet. just a good artist. maybe someday kahno will right a poem book and I'll illistrate is ( I hope I speeled that right ).

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (8-5-2004 - 09:55 AM)
Damn that really is a good poem... i like the style... i developed anorexia too... have bullimic tendecies aswell... my bmi is only 17.5 so i'm underweight but i feel huge... love you and this is such a beautiful poem *huggles*

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