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Killing You Mentaly
written by Khaotic
08:38 PM 4/6/05
choke on the taste of blood down to the roots hardcore rotten destroyed by few
buryed by the dozen cant stand the chance always found you dancing in your lie
so fly to the way that causes the day to go unseen be like the fly look away
take your time find your way and bury yourself deep in your own pile of shit
eating every piece of it as your rot like the piece of shit you where molded to
become i have demented you i have made you despise me cause i am more obscene
then you take apon the chances stab what you cant see be what you cant see look
into the shield of my own reality take a jump inside the jet of mortality take
a closer look in the insanity what can you say i can always speak what breaks
through the barriers of your unsecure mind as you cry its so unreal to see you
so shallow and emotional you can never try to be secure with your own lies so
f**k with the rest leave the trusted left in there own demise find your own way
stop trying to take mying before it all goes away for you today the happyness
floods my mind take control of your actions before you make me take your life
this silence that i put on you have given you the time to hate me all the way
but the other day i can always break through your shields another day il kill
you mentaly


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» Comments / Feedback
by bright_shadow (4-6-2005 - 09:05 PM)
Might try some puncuation next time, you jus sorta rammed it all together, nice other than that

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