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» Poem: i can't be in love
i can't be in love
written by trulybroken57
09:19 PM 4/7/05
i can't love you,
this isn't love,
i'm sorry if this hurts......
i can't say it......
every time you do, it hurts to breathe,
we're too young........
i care for you,
i need you to be here
for yourself, and not for me.......
i won't break,
i can catch myself...........
i can't be your everything...........
you don't love me,
you know it,
we're too young,
i don't want to be in love........
you don't hear me crying out in my confusion,
you don't see how i hurt because this isn't real,
i can't be in love,
i'm too young..........
maybe someday, just not today,
just not today..............
not for awhile.........
please don't take this harshly,
i still want you here with me,
i just can't love you,
you just can't love me.............
i can't be your obsession,
i can't be your everything............
this hurts too much.......................


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
please don't take this the wrong way.......niether of us is ready.......just let up a little.........don't take things so seriously.......please.............
please comment........

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» Comments / Feedback
by Ev0l_sin#TRIP (4-7-2005 - 09:32 PM)
i know where your commin from actualy, a good friend of mine has told me and keeps tellin me he loves me, and it really shocked,andi tried to explain to him that theres no possible way he could ,but he says different.

by Emo.style. (4-10-2005 - 10:23 PM)
notmy favorite poem of yours babe, but it really means a lot coming from you. i mean it reminds me of my poem that i wrote to h im. its kinda a statement/letter/notice. i love you. oh and for everyone else in the world.... "I LOVE THIS GIRL" im here hun...

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