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» Poem: Waiting Out The Night
Waiting Out The Night
written by SuperBob
04:16 AM 8/4/04
Alone in the dark we watch the world spin
Holding on to something false, onto something from within
Waiting to see the lights turn on
We stand around wondering what is held by dawn
From the days to the nights we see so many things
Never questioning the dreams that fly without wings


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont knw about this one....it was suppose to go with By The Night-Light....but I didn't enjoy that...so I just stuck it on its own...anyroad...i really like the last two lines...especially "dreams that fly without wings"....dont know why...but for some reason...i find that means a lot to me...i need a better title though...i cant think of one...so i heard that in a song so i used it...i need something better....HELP ME OUT PLEASE!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by XxheartbrokenxX (8-4-2004 - 04:21 AM)
wow,that poem means alot to me,it's hard to explain but i like it alot.

by XxheartbrokenxX (8-4-2004 - 04:21 AM)
wow,that poem means alot to me,it's hard to explain but i like it alot.

by brit420brat69 (8-4-2004 - 06:14 AM)
i can relate

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