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Letting you go
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk05:20 PM 4/8/05Thoughts of you fill my mind.
Broken hearted, time after time.
My poor wandering heart,
seemed to just linger too far.
It has been unloved for so long,
it wanted to feel alive but now it's simply gone.
Crushed agian by whats not real,
you don't care at all how I feel.
I just wish for once you would see,
what you really do to me.
Maybe then you'd finally know,
you cause alot of pain, but it's worse letting you go. |
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Please comment im begging you :(
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| » Comments / Feedback | by brokenxsmile (4-8-2005 - 05:21 PM)
| awww it's so sad, but it's really good too! :) keep it up |
by (guest) (4-8-2005 - 08:41 PM)
by (guest) (4-9-2005 - 12:23 AM)
| this is mary i dont know if ull get this comment kuz the computer if fuckin gay, but i really like this one! its in my top 5 i like it....its really good. well i g2g now so i guess ill talk to u later. bye |
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