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» Poem: Feeling's Hidden
Feeling's Hidden
written by Khaotic
09:47 PM 4/8/05
Verse 1:
my life seems dark today
feelings are such awaste
cant find anyone to relate
trying to hold on today
i get nothing but hate
cant never find a reason why
so why do i even take it
just to be hollow...

Chorus 1:
i cant take this any longer
i need someone to help me
i cant take this any longer
why do i take this even more
why dont you relate to me
i need somebody to be with me
as my feelings are so hidden
deep inside it hurts me
my hate is eating me apart..

Verse 2:
when standing all alone i take it
before everyone takes me down
when arriving around this time
two bullets cross my life
when looking at all the blank faces
i cant be in this place i have hate
so why cant i even replace my hate
i am finding it harder to really find
i tried but i can see my hate taken over me
so why do i create hate just to be hollow

Chorus 2:
i cant take this any longer
i am stalling time..takening what i hated
looking for everything i can find
when arriving around this time
two bullets cross my life
when looking at all the blank faces
isnt there something wrong with me
i cant take this anymore feelings
as my feelings are so hidden
deep inside it hurts me
my hate is eating me apart..

Verse 3:
when standing all alone i take it
before everyone takes me down
when arriving around this time
two bullets cross my life
when looking at all the blank faces
i cant be in this place i have hate
so why cant i even replace my hate
i am finding it harder to really find
i tried but i can see my hate taken over me
so why do i create hate just to be hollow
as my hurt turns into hating i feel hollow
why cant anything just be fine....

Chorus 3:
i cant take this any longer
i am stalling time..takening what i hated
looking for everything i can find
when arriving around this time
two bullets cross my life
when looking at all the blank faces
isnt there something wrong with me
i cant take this anymore feelings
i cant take this any longer
i need someone to help me
i cant take this any longer
why do i take this even more
as my feelings are so hidden
deep inside it hurts me
my hate is eating me apart..


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